Thursday, 28 November 2013
Wednesday, 27 November 2013
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Monday, 14 October 2013
Wednesday, 18 September 2013
Tuesday, 17 September 2013
The garden
18.9.2013
Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.
WALT: describe
SC:
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture
Wednesday, 11 September 2013
Make paint
Words I want to use:
Puke Gross
Vomit Slippery
Squishy Smoth
Slimy Runny
Yucky Stinky
Structure:
See: It was runny like water but we did not add water
Feel: It felt squishy like wet sand
Hear: I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud
Smell: Like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard
Taste: It tasted like puke when I vomited.
WALT: describe
The peas went splatter splatter as the whizz swished them. The paint was runny like water but we did not add water. It felt the paint. It felt squishy wet sand like at the beach. I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud. It felt like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard. It tasted like puke when I vomited.
Monday, 9 September 2013
Monday, 26 August 2013
Sport
On the crowd go's wild Scott Dickson was in pit lane and when he left he hit a person from another pit place. He injured 3 people.
Sunday, 25 August 2013
Thursday, 11 July 2013
Thursday, 4 July 2013
Wednesday, 3 July 2013
Production writing.
It all started on Tuesday morning when I woke up. I felt funny. Today was the day. PRODUCTION!!! It was a rush to get ready. Finally I got to school. I felt so nervous!
When we got to the bus all I could smell was Petrol Petrol and more Petrol. It was very loud on the bus. Excitement grabbed everyone.
When we got to the regent it look ginormous. It was like a huge maze. I almost got lost. We watched lots of class's. Finally it was our turn. We did I want candy from hop. Then it was the real. All the parents were cheering very loud. Or costume looked funny. We had pink lipstick noses.
Wednesday, 26 June 2013
Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Tuesday, 18 June 2013
Term 2 values
Last term I set a goal the goal was to manage my time because I wasn't finished to late.
This term I In proved it because I get stuff finished on time.
Thursday, 13 June 2013
Making connections
I made a connection with second hand stivey.
Monday, 10 June 2013
Sunday, 19 May 2013
My first game of rugby
I'm wearing black headgear with a green stripe.
Wednesday, 15 May 2013
Wednesday, 8 May 2013
SLC Reflection
WHAT: My SLC.
NOW WHAT: I need to speak quicker because I ran out of time.
Tuesday, 16 April 2013
End of Term
Ebony says: Well done on your student led conference Lachlan. I like how confidently you shared what your learning goals were. You were also very honest and thoughtful your reflection on your next steps. You always aim to get tasks completed in time. Perhaps you could put lots of effort into the quality of your creations as well.
Mihi
Ebony says: What a fantastic effort at sharing your mihi. I like how you problem solved some technical issues and completed the task in time. Well done!
Wednesday, 10 April 2013
daylight savings
WALT: clarify unknown words when we read
Success Criteria:
Success Criteria:
- stop
- ask someone for help (like an adult)
- sound it out
- reread
- look at the pictures
- look at a glossary
- read to the end of the sentence
- look at the pictures
- ask someone who might know about the topic
Ebony says: you are a fantastic reader Loki. It is a good strategy to stop and clarify unknown words. You have some good ideas on how to solve theses unknown words independently. Perhaps you could include ways to check your findings are correct.
Tuesday, 9 April 2013
Marae trip
WALT: write a recount
That means we are writing about an experience that we have had.
Success Criteria:
Ebony says: I thought you would enjoy that game. Perhaps you could help teach others in the class how to play sometime. You did a great job adding detail about what you did and how you felt. I wonder if you had more time if you could tell us a bit more about what happened during your game. Did you get a try? I bet that would feel awesome!
That means we are writing about an experience that we have had.
Success Criteria:
- Write what we enjoyed
- Write about how we felt
- Add detail about what I did
- Write about what it looked like
Ebony says: I thought you would enjoy that game. Perhaps you could help teach others in the class how to play sometime. You did a great job adding detail about what you did and how you felt. I wonder if you had more time if you could tell us a bit more about what happened during your game. Did you get a try? I bet that would feel awesome!
Thursday, 4 April 2013
Buddy class koru art
WALT:use a symbol to represent something special to me.
First I looked at pictures then we drew some koru with pastal.Then we washed it with black dye.
I found colouring the white in a bit tricky. The green koru are the boys. The little koru is my little brother Connor, the next biggest is me and the biggest is dad. The red one is mum.
After
Before
Ebony says: I like the way the red koru stands out. I wonder why this one is special? Can you talk about what these koru represent? This is a fantastic piece of art Lachlan. You showed good persistence and accuracy, especially with the white.First I looked at pictures then we drew some koru with pastal.Then we washed it with black dye.
I found colouring the white in a bit tricky. The green koru are the boys. The little koru is my little brother Connor, the next biggest is me and the biggest is dad. The red one is mum.
After
Before
Tuesday, 2 April 2013
My graph
WALT: make and read a graph
Success Criteria:
Write about what kind of graph you made. I made a pie graph
What is the most popular? It is red and red is iPads
What is the least popular? It is blue and blue is laptop PC
Ebony says: Your graph clearly shows what types of devices are most popular in our class. Can you talk about what type of graph you created? Success Criteria:
- labels
- title
- colour
- data (information)
- author
Write about what kind of graph you made. I made a pie graph
What is the most popular? It is red and red is iPads
What is the least popular? It is blue and blue is laptop PC
Sunday, 17 March 2013
Thursday, 7 March 2013
About me
Hi I'm Lachlan. I am 7. I go to Russell Street School. I am In room 13. I am so excited about sharing my learning on this blog.
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