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grasshopper tenis refection

Science

The garden

18.9.2013

Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.

WALT: describe

SC:

what reminds us off

what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like

show not tell

use words that help build a picture

I was stumbling around when I had my blind fold on.I open my eye's. I see a green and yellow plaza. But something werid cuart my eye. I saw something holding on to a umbrella tree. All the tree needed a tarpolon on top.

Make paint

Words I want to use:
Puke               Gross
Vomit               Slippery
Squishy               Smoth
Slimy               Runny
Yucky               Stinky


Structure:
See: It was runny like water but we did not add water

Feel: It felt squishy like wet sand

Hear: I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud

Smell: Like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard

Taste: It tasted like puke when I vomited.

WALT: describe

The peas went splatter splatter as the whizz swished them. The paint was runny like water but we did not add water. It felt the paint. It felt squishy  wet sand like at the beach. I heard squish squish like my gumboot sinking in mud. It felt like wet dirt like the mud in my back yard. It tasted like puke when I vomited.

Kapahaka

WALT:Ask & answer question's about what we read.
What lesson can we learn from this story.

I learn't that if you don't try stuff you don't no what it is like. This is called risk taking!
Author: Lisa Rangiaho