Tuesday, 17 September 2013

The garden


Task: write a story to tell someone about our garden.

WALT: describe
what reminds us off
what it looks like, feels like, tastes like, smells like, sounds like
show not tell
use words that help build a picture

I was stumbling around when I had my blind fold on.I open my eye's. I see a green and yellow plaza. But something werid cuart my eye. I saw something holding on to a umbrella tree. All the tree needed a tarpolon on top.

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