Tuesday, 10 June 2014

Writing sample


Description:we are doing this to show what we are learning about energy.

Evaluation: I reckon I could make it mare visual.

Feedback/feedforward:I think you could of added more detail on the description. I think you did well at making it visual. 


  1. I think you could of described how they work and what they mean.

  2. Lachlan, you have explained the two types of energy and related it to what the newtons cradle does. However you demonstrated a really clear understanding of it when we spoke of it in class, I just wish we could have seen some more of those of those ideas.